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038/064 - Fall - Sheik/Link - "Promise." [Nov. 12th, 2006|12:31 am]
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Title: Promise.
Fandom: The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time.
Characters: Sheik, Link.
Drabble Number: 038.
Prompt Number: 064.
Prompt Word: Fall.
Raiting: PG.
Genre: Romance.
Quote: “He is outside of everything, and alien everywhere. He is an aesthetic solitary. His beautiful, light imagination is the wing that on the autumn evening just brushes the dusky window.” ~Henry James (1843-1916) American author.
Word Count: 185.
Notes: Ridiculously short, and ridiculously fluffy.

Promise.

It was Autumn when they bid each other good-bye. The forest was yellow and orange and brown and red, filled with the colors of endings and the scent of departure. They held each other's eyes and waited patiently for the silence to be over, yet not wanting it to be over before they had savored the last second of their time together. Everything around them was preparing for the slumber of winter... like their hearts, their love, when the time to leave would come.

"I will miss you," The Shadow admitted softly, surprising himself and his companion when his voice echoed in the stillness of the forest.

They created a shard of eternity in that moment, when their eyes met, truly met and everything else became unimportant and unnecessary.

"I will find you," The Hero promised ferverently, and then he ran away, towards Destiny and Duty and all those important things that made him a Hero.

He leaves behind his heart in the red eyes, lost amidst the falling leaves and the sorrowful forest, and took with him only a memory of a kiss.
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[User Picture]From: [info]arora_kayd
2006-11-12 10:07 am (UTC)

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Fluff isn't bad. Nope nope.
[User Picture]From: [info]n0_leaf_clover
2006-11-13 10:01 pm (UTC)

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See, you label this as fluff. It's a lie.
You don't DO fluff.
You don't even have that setting.

You do, however, have an 'awesome' setting, and this is right there.
Now, understand, I'm not saying you can't do 'fluff'-like things. But it's not fluff... this is bittersweet, and pretty, and elegant, and while fluff does not negate these things, these things together tend to negate fluff.

What I'm trying to say is that this is pure awesome. That should be a genre. Just for you.

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It was Autumn when they bid each other good-bye. The forest was yellow and orange and brown and red, filled with the colors of endings and the scent of departure."

<---have my babies
[User Picture]From: [info]broadwing
2007-01-10 09:39 am (UTC)

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I would say yes, very bittersweet. The beauty is, it dosn't need to be longer.

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